doctorow at June 30th, 2014 14:01 — #1
jorpho at June 30th, 2014 16:00 — #2
The first page is fine, but it goes right off the rails on the second one. It might have worked better as a three-pager.
Nice idea, though.
doctorow at July 5th, 2014 14:01 — #3
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