doctorow — 2014-06-30T14:01:03-04:00 — #1
jorpho — 2014-06-30T16:00:38-04:00 — #2
The first page is fine, but it goes right off the rails on the second one. It might have worked better as a three-pager.
Nice idea, though.
doctorow — 2014-07-05T14:01:16-04:00 — #3
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