Cory,
Nice job with the IBM reference. And by nice job I mean nice job missing a great opportunity to actually make a comparison with some reflective value vs just throwing it all away on some sort of half baked post modern raised eyebrow slur. The whole IBM in Nazi Germany thing is pretty deplorable but it really makes no sense in this context. Instead, you could have talked about how Big Blue has in the past decade pretty solidly shat upon their workers again and again and again; that would be an interesting counterpoint to the thesis of this article. Instead you went for the lazy, easy, and not very insightful characterization. You can and should do better.