Hi.
May I sugest some changes to the translation that will bring it closer to the original?
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I will become of steel to toughen up my skin
And even if the winds of life blow strong
I will be like a reed that bends
But always stays on its feet
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When the world loses all its magic
When my enemy is myself
If memories haunts me
When I can’t recognize even my own voice
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Should the devil pass me the check
Or if at some point I am missing you
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