As a criticism, that would just confuse me.
But I write like I type, with lots of crossing out, mistakes and wildly varying degrees of legibility. …shrugs…
Your kid is cooler than the others by at least, oh, 20%. So whatever you’re doing, it’s working.
He’ll be disappointed this time. The dark green is a much prettier colour, but next time, yep. Full neon UV-glow green.
I think I see what you’re getting at there and I want to make a more in-depth reply to this, but it’ll have to wait until later when the brain is a touch more in-focus. 
