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“Joe Bardizbanian and his high school girlfriend, Jackie, who he later married”!?!
Mark, Mark, Mark: “Joe Bardizbanian and his high school girlfriend, Jackie, whom he later married”
/btw: did the lacquer flake off your Levenger pen too? (note to self: send them email.)
//still looks cool, though.
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Joe Bardibzanian might disagree. I’m with him.
Fortunately for Joe, the teacher wasn’t much of a proofreader.
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Turn the sentence around to clarify the structure: “Joe Bardizbanian and his high school girlfriend, Jackie. He later married her (or she?)”
I think the main issue is the lack of secret electromagnets.
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