I hope it’s not too late for proofreading
I thought Marina was engaged to Kevin
She?
Unless… Kevin is hermaphrodite and changes gender every other paragraph?
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I noticed the couch cushion left a mark on her check rather than cheek, if memory serves.
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Thanks, guys. I ran it through a few copy editors but clearly I missed some.
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