Originally published at: http://boingboing.net/2017/07/24/delightful-fibonacci-sequence.html

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The Fibonacci sequence doesn’t end after the eighth term. It keeps going. I’d say the author has some work to do. I’ll call him when the Fibonacci sequence ends.

Number five is prime

So is the number seven

This is less clever

He edited that part out. It was really good, but sometimes you have to kill your darlings.

Neat, though I’d like one that goes by syllable count rather than word count.

I’d like one that didn’t read like prose.

My

feels

are that

syllables

mark the pattern best

when combining math and language

for it is the wordless rhythm that must pass the test.

Or splitting a line in two bits, make a rhyming couplet with mathematical shits

I hope someone has shown this to Poesy Doctorow.

You can see how this might spiral out of control.

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