I think the problem with most poorly written sex scenes is that they focus on the mechanics of the sex. That’s not the interesting part. Much more interesting are the emotional and psychological elements. The sexual mechanics can serve as the drivers of the scenes, but the really streaky stuff comes from the more subtle elements.
Montague stood over the toilet and fished out his member, but the grasp he felt upon that shrivelled tube was not his own familiar hand, but the fierce and icy grip of Death’s skeletal phalanges!
“FANCY MEETING YOU HERE,” the tomb-deep voice purred sepulchrally… and he knew no more!
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