boingboing at May 7th, 2014 09:00 — #1
sdfrost61 at May 7th, 2014 09:51 — #2
Page 24: "Boing ... boing". Product placement?
emo_pinata at May 7th, 2014 09:57 — #3
There's a more extensive preview on amazon
tamahome at May 7th, 2014 10:53 — #4
steampunkbanana at May 7th, 2014 10:58 — #5
You don't like the sunrise scene in Lawrence of Arabia, do you?
tamahome at May 7th, 2014 11:13 — #6
Comic books aren't movies. Thank you for illustrating my point.
steampunkbanana at May 7th, 2014 11:16 — #7
No, but I'm wondering why you might need words in panels where a girl rides her bike around. I recall a lot of summers where not a lot was really said but things were just done. The beauty of comics is that they can visually present information without text telling the story. A lot like movies at times.
Offhand, how would adding text to the silent panels help and what would you prefer to see them say?
crenquis at May 7th, 2014 11:52 — #8
For starters they could have added something like this when she is running the stick through the roadside grass:
emo_pinata at May 7th, 2014 12:37 — #9
So what is the appropriate proportion of silent panels to ones with non-onomatopoeic text? Because it seems like it's not even a quarter of the panels are missing text, and all of them are clearly conveying something.
I think it's quite well done.
steampunkbanana at May 7th, 2014 12:39 — #10
Fixed it! I did leave one panel where the discovery of the rock leaves her truly speechless. I thought this would really emphasize the magnificent element of nature and discovery.
crenquis at May 7th, 2014 12:56 — #11
hmsgoose at May 8th, 2014 18:56 — #12
I love it when comic books have hand-drawn panels. It's like nice wood trim...
boingboing at May 12th, 2014 09:00 — #13
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