Meet Snakey Crocodile-Face was a 23-foot-long ancient serpentine sea monster hailed from Wyoming.

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Meet Snakey Crocodile-Face a 23-foot-long ancient serpentine sea monster that hailed from Wyoming.

Lose the was.

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hailed from Wyoming.

Seems legit.

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I think you will find that it preferred to be known as Snakey McCrocodile-Face. It was very proud of its Scottish ancestry.

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Meet Snakey Crocodile-Face was a 23-foot-long ancient serpentine sea monster hailed from Wyoming

I was confused at first too, but then I realized that the sea monster’s name was “Meet Snakey Crocodile-Face”.

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Of course. It seems pretty obvious to me that this is the great, great,…great-grandpappy of Nessie.

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Proving the last time Wyoming was relevant was when it was under water.

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Came to say the same. Well, I was going to say choose one of the following:

Meet Snakey Crocodile-Face, who was a 23-foot-long ancient serpentine sea monster that hailed from Wyoming.

Meet Snakey Crocodile-Face, a 23-foot-long ancient serpentine sea monster, hailing from Wyoming. [Note the commas - two of them]

Snakey Crocodile-Face was a 23-foot-long ancient serpentine sea monster that hailed from Wyoming.

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